Oli, the analysis of the digipak on the first slide is perceptive and you discuss key signifiers and how unconventional the design is. The analysis of the video however is very brief. You do attempt to apply semiotics and identify some evidence of Dyer's theory on the construct of the star image, however you need to amend to include a clearer introduction to his theory and more specific analysis of frames. The same for semiotics. Use the exemplar given as a guide. Currently this is low L3.
Oli, the analysis of the digipak on the first slide is perceptive and you discuss key signifiers and how unconventional the design is. The analysis of the video however is very brief. You do attempt to apply semiotics and identify some evidence of Dyer's theory on the construct of the star image, however you need to amend to include a clearer introduction to his theory and more specific analysis of frames. The same for semiotics. Use the exemplar given as a guide. Currently this is low L3.
ReplyDeleteIn addition, you should draw a link between the two texts in the promo package - how do they together reinforce the star image?
ReplyDeleteIn addition, you should draw a link between the two texts in the promo package - how do they together reinforce the star image?
ReplyDeleteImproved now - well done
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